Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.

                                                             1. needed 

For many years, she was Mum.My mother was a career woman and has 

                        2. it                                                                      3. had

her own problems to take care∧, but when I needed her, she was always  there.

                                            4. of

Her strength came from anywhere.I don't quite know, somewhere very

                                 5. somewhere

deep.She was so strong that she would never break down, even while(though/if)

                                                                                                6. when

I went to her with all my littleboy problems and shout at her.

                                                                   7. shouted 

Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage to try things  other  

                                                         8. 去掉                                9. others

thought were impossible.A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.

                                                                          10. strong