Dear Steve,

I’ve leaned your problem. I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meeting, football games and singing competitions. I’m sure you will soon be among friends.

Best wished

Diana

题目分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封给你的朋友的回信。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在和过去时态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配问题，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。