One possible version：

Last Sunday I had a great time last Sunday．1 went to the Zoo．

My father was on his day off on that day．We got up very early in the morning．We had a quick breakfast and went out．We got to the Zoo at half past eight． There were many kinds of animals in it．We went to see The pandas first．They were very lovely．I love them very much．Then we went to see a tiger．The tiger was big．1 was a little afraid of it．But the tiger slept all the time．Then we went to watch a monkey show．The clever monkeys did all kinds of things．They were really interesting and made us laugh again and again．We got home at half past twelve．1 was very fired but very happy．

题目分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。根据提示，可知时态主要是一般过去时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。