Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are quite a lot of places if interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China, so the winter here is long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing, because it’s cool. We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one. I’m glad to say that Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. This will give us the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. Welcome to Beijing and I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.

题目分析：这是一篇命题作文。题目中已经给出了文章所要写的内容，介绍北京。学生有学过相关的课文，在写作时可运用所学知识，展开想象，可以介绍北京的景点和美食等。写作时注意句子的完整性和表达的准确性。句子之间可适当运用连词，使文章的结构更紧凑，逻辑更严密。

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这篇文章表述清晰，结构完整。文中有很多有用的表达方式和句型：As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China…如你所知，北京位于中国的北方。As you know如你所知。Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing秋天是来北京的最好季节；We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one.北京还有很多美食，其中北京烤鸭是最有名的了。这两个句子都用到了形容词的最高级。