Dear Editor,

I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we've had about whether the students should take physical exercise. 60% of the students think that we should do exercises every day. They think we can do morning exercises, play ping-pong, or play basketball. We should not do exercises for a long time. Doing exercises can make our body healthy and reduce our illness.

The other 40% of the students think that doing exercises is a waste of time. Doing exercises makes us tired. After the exercises, we will be excited and won't be concentrated to study for a long time. And what's more, doing exercises may cause wound.

Yours,

Li Hua

题目分析：这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份介绍一下学生们之间进行的一个讨论。这个讨论是关于学生是否应该参加体育锻炼的。在表格中给出了我们详细的信息，来说明讨论的情况。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。这篇作文应主要有三部分。第一部分是点明文章的主题，这一点在作文的开头已经给我们写好了。第二部分是表格中60%的学生的观点，他们是持赞成的态度的；第三部分就是表格中的另一部分，即持反对态度的同学们的观点。将短文分成这三部分可以使我们的作文有条理。写作时可能用到的短语如do exercises, make … healthy, a waste of等。另外这篇短文还涉及了我们非常熟悉的表示从事某种运动的短语，如play ping-pong等。写作时注意语句间的衔接，这样才能使文章表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先这篇作文的结构完整，层次分明。这篇作文共有两段。第一段是承接题目中所给出的开头，点明主题之后，叙述了支持学生应该参加体育锻炼的学生们的观点。要点完整，表达准确。第二段是另外一部分同学的观点，他们觉得学生们不应该参加体育锻炼。其中除了表格中给出的原因之外，作者自己又加了一条And what's more, doing exercises may cause wound.，比较切合文章整体的意思。其次这篇作文较好的注意了语句之间的链接，力求使文章表达流畅。文章句型的使用如60% of the students think that we…、Doing exercises can make our body healthy and reduce our illness、The other 40% of the students think that doing exercises is a waste of time、And what's more,等。