Dear Abby,

I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.

First, I have so much homework to do every day that I don’t have anytime for my hobbies. Second, I have to stay up late to finish all the exercises, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel sleepy in class the next day. Third. because of not having time for sport and sleep, I often feel tired and stressed. Also I fall ill easily. I don’t know if I can keep on with study. What should I do? I’d like you to give me some advice.

Yours,

Lily

题目分析：这是一封看图作文。主要是写在九年级所遇到了困难。从图中我们可以看到一个女孩在做着一大堆的作业，由此可联系自己的实际感受写下面临的问题。同时，这是一封求助信，结尾可要求别人给你提供建议。所以，写作时要注意文章的完整性。注意句子的完整性和连贯性。

【亮点分析】

文章结构完整，表达清晰。在写问题的时候，用了first，second，third使文章结构更明了。另外，文章用了很多的短语和句式，如：so…that…如此…以至于…; stay up 熬夜；because of 因为；keep on with跟上等等；另外用了一些状语从句，例如so引导的结果状语从句，because 引导的原因状语从句等，使文章更紧凑和流畅。