Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home from school, I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing. A volunteer tried-to stop them, but no one listened to him Instead, they ran the red light quickly. Just then, a bus came. One of them was nearly hit by the running bus.

In my opinion, jaywalking is a bad habit. It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger. I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light.  Look both sides / ways when you cross the road

题目分析：这是一篇看图作文。由于是描述过去的经历，故用过去时态，根据要求用第一人称。

【亮点说明】这篇短文层次分明，语言流畅，能把要点表达清楚。In my opinion,，not only…but also等的应用给短文增色不少。