上个星期天晚上,你和家人一起去看京剧。谈谈去之前你的心情及看过之后的体会。词数80个左右。
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Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...
Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.
题目分析:本文是话题作文,给出的材料很少,只提到了看京剧,需要学生自己组织材料,在动笔前先列出作文提纲,一定要注意动词的时态,写出看京剧前后的感受,可以适当发挥。要用一些过渡词或过渡句子来使文章衔接自然。
【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语或句式,如:I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.等,句中用了一些连词如:because,when,so…that等。提醒学生平时注意积累一些短语或句式。