My dream

I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.

I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them. At the same time, I will do all I can to exercise myself. I make my mind to hold on my dream till one day it comes true.

题目分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍自己的梦想。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容丰富，语言流畅，条理清晰，无语法错误。同时句式变化多样，连词

能合理的运用，如Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.

At the same time ，It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them等