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August 16,      Thursday

     We had a trip today. It was very humid this morning. I felt a little cool because it rained yesterday. I

brought much chicken, fried fish and some bottles of drink.

     At about seven we got on the bus and began the trip. When we got to the Palace Museum, it's already

eight o'clock. We saw many good buildings. We learned a lot from the visiting.

     We left the Palace Museum for the Great Wall at eleven. We had lunch at half past twelve at the foot

of the Great Wall. The food and the drink were very delicious! We stayed there for about four hours. We

got back at about six. We had a good time today. I hope that we will have another trip soon.