参考答案：[1] As vividly depicted in the picture，the little child has double loads on his shoulder．One burden is exerted by his teachers while the other is by his parents，which makes him out of breath Both the teachers and the parents consider entering college as the only goal．
[2] This phenomenon should be condemned as it not only does harm to children’s physical and mental health，but also results in a frustrating life．There is no need to force their children to study．[3] Firstly，interest is the best teacher．2．The student who doesn’t do well in study may have other shining points．[4] Moreover，going to the university is not the only way to live a well-off life．[5] There are masters in all walks of life．[6] Last but not least，if we cannot take actions，some undesirable results may come out on the children．
3．[7] From what have been discussed above，we can see that it is necessary that some effective measures be taken to reduce the study burden on students．[8] On the one hand，we should find out what the strong points a child possesses．[9] On the other hand．a sound mind．a healthy body and an optimistic attitude towards lire are far more important than going to college．

解析：[主题联想]
金榜题名需努力
此作文为图画式观点论证型作文，题材属于社会生活类。画面中，该学生被两座大山重重地压着，大汗淋漓，快要喘不过气来，一座是来自老师的压力，另一座是家长的期望。图画要传达的意思是当代学生的负担依然未减，考上大学依然是学生、家长和老师的最终期待目标，为达到这个目标，学生需要付出艰辛的努力。
就结构而言，文章可以采用三段式，第一段描述图画，点明文章主题：当今学生的负担依然未减轻：第二段阐明图画内涵；第三段发表自己的看法。
[框架构思]
Paragraph One：Describe the picture and point out the theme．
Paragraph Two：Interpret the implications of the picture and give specific and detailed explanations．
Paragraph Three：Point out the viewpoint and give some suggestions．
[范文点评]
[1] 图画式作文常用的开篇语
[2] 引出主题和下文
[3] [4]和[6]衔接词的运用使得文章层次清晰明了
[5] 使用谚语，更加形象生动地揭示图画主题
[7] 阐明自己的观点，引出解决问题的措施，过渡自然，衔接合理
[8]和[9]分两点详述采取的措施