短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was
about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked,
but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But
before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,
my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found
out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.
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