Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
参考答案:
As you can see in the picture, a number of individuals join hands to form a circle in the spotlight, with eyes fixing on the same goal, and hearts full of desire for great success. [A]Altogether, the circle they form appears to be a crown. The word "cooperation" is below the picture in bold. As it is, [B]this is a simple black and white picture; however, [B]every person who fastens his or her eyes on it will definitely feel the strong power of being a team. Beyond doubt, this picture reveals the importance of cooperation.
Never could the urgency to work together with each other be so great in the present shrinking world. [C]As competition in all lines of work grows increasingly fierce, the only way to defeat our rivals is through powerful teamwork. Take the basketball hero Yao Ming as an example, [D]he can slam-dunk smartly because all his teammates contribute more or less to his outstanding performance. Likewise, the successful launching of Chang’e No.A lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists’ joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment. If we work separately, we will be confined to frail minds and limited resources.[E]
As far as I am concerned, I do embrace the spirit of cooperation. We should associate ourselves harmoniously with our companions in every attempt towards our goals. As long as we have the same goal and the willingness to work with others, the joint efforts will bear sweet fruits of success. As the proverb goes, unity is strength.[F]
解析:
图画中描绘的是一群站在聚光灯下的纸人,彼此手拉着手围成一个圆圈,形状酷似一顶王冠,象征着成功与荣耀。图画下方为该图的题目:“合作”。由图画内容可知,这幅图意在反映当今社会各行各业强调的合作精神。图中,所有的人手牵着手,众志成城,围成的圆圈牢不可破。由此我们可以确定这篇文章的主题:合作的重要性。
根据题目要求,我们可将本篇作文行文的思路整理如下:
第一段:描绘图画的内容,引出主题。
第二段:用一两个事例论证主题。
第三段:发表自己的观点,总结令文,再次点明主题。
[1] with结构将各短句糅合,既表达完整意思,又使句式富于变化。
[2] 此句型用来过渡,通过描述图画内容,自然地引出主题。
[3] 正面论证,写作中多使用倒装句式,不仅能强调论点,还会给文章增色不少。
[4] 引用例证,证明观点。
[5] 反面论证,进一步证明了主题。
[6] 引用谚语,既重申了主题,亦对主题进行了升华。