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     Hello, everyone ,

    This is my survey that I did last week. In my report I'll tell you something about one of the best

students in our school. Let me introduce something about him to you.

    His name is Wang Lin. He studies in Glass Eight, Grade Eight. He is tall and kind to others. He

studies very hard at his subjects. Every day he comes to school all by bike. In classes, he listens to the

teachers carefully. He did all kinds of sports activities. He is always ready to help others. He never plays

computer games, but speaks English as much as possible. We all like him.

    That's all, thank you.