One possible version:                                                               

                                                                           My future    

     What do I want to do when I' m older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a

basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the

writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.    

     I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very

interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musicians

and singer love playing the piano.   

     I play the piano when I’m ten years old. Now I’m in 9Tand five. I hope when I’m sixteen years old,

I can become grand eight.  I’ll be harder and harder to practice.    

     Become a piano player is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.