问题 写作题

假如你是李华,就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。
要点:
 
李华
爱好
对太空旅行感兴趣;经常到图书馆阅读资料
困惑
得不到老师理解
观点
1.个人爱好有助于学习;
2. ……(至少一点)
老师
观点
时间应花在功课上;成绩就是一切
注意:1. 词数: 80个左右(开头和结尾已给出的内容不记入总词数);
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译;
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Li Hua
答案

Dear Stephen,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.

I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.

What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes

Li Hua

题目分析: 这是一篇应用文写作,写一封电子邮件谈谈自己的困惑并请求帮助。本题给出的材料较为详细,故动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料,确定写作内容。然后应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯,适当使用序数词,连接词。

点评:注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时态,人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑。

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