I have a pen pal. Her name is Jane. Her father is an office worker. He works in an office. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school. Jane is a student. She has a sister. Her sister is only five years old. Jane usually gets up at 6:10. She has breakfast at 6:30 and goes to school at 7:20. Jane has lunch at a quarter past twelve. In the afternoon, she goes home at five o’clock. Then she helps her mother cook supper. They have dinner at six twenty –five.

题目分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一个新笔友。本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称应该是第三人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。

点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。