Lucy has a pet cat. Her name is poppy and she is three years old. She has short, grey fur and white paws. Her eyes are green. The cat has a long black and white tail. She is quite small and weighs about one kilogram.

Most of the time, she just wants to sleep in the basket. Usually, she eats cat food, but her favourite food is fish and mice. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She is usually very friendly and quiet. If she is hungry, she will misow.

题目分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自家的小花猫。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her name is……，He has^等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。