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今年是建党90周年，90年来，在党的领导下，我们的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你根据下列表格中的汉语提示，写一篇题为“The changes to our hometown”的英语短文，介绍家乡巨变，并谈谈你的感受。内容要点如下：
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不使用真实姓名和校名等。 The changes to our hometown Our hometown has changed a lot over the past 90 years.. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ |
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In the past, the environment was very good. The air was blue and the river was clean. People lived in small houses. People went to the city center on foot or by bus.
But now the changes have taken place in my hometown.. The lives are becoming better . The environment was not as good as before. The river is not clean. The fish in the river is dead. The lives of the people have improved a lot. People go to the city centre by bus , train or by car.
题目分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己家乡的变化。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当谈谈自己的感受。在写作时，由于本文涉及过去现在的时间，注意时态与时间状语的搭配。
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。