假如你是Paul,你想推荐你的同学John获得“最佳学生奖”,请你根据下面表格中的信息,写一封推荐信给你们的班主任王老师。
要求:1要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2.不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥,但不可出现真实姓名、班级等; 3.词数: 80个字 左右。(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总次数) Dear Mr Wang I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award. If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you. Yours Paul |
:Dear Mr Wang
I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports. He can also play the piano well. He is friendly and often helps the other students with their lessons. Last week, he saw a boy lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday he saved a child out of water.
If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Paul
:题目分析: 这是一篇应用文写作,写一封信。给出的材料比较全面,我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
点评:注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题,时态一般是一般现在时态,人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明,说明有条理,符合逻辑。