My name is Zhang Wei. I was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province in March, 1998. I study in Ningbo Foreign School. I have worked for our school newspaper for two years. I like English writing and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year, I won the first prize in the school English speech contest. I enjoy reading English stories and collecting stamps. My favorite sport is basketball. My e-mail address is liming@126.com.

题目分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

点评：本文属于图表类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。