书面表达 江苏省教育厅最近公布的学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
条理清楚、语句连贯。 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。 （参考词汇：近视nearsighted 形成好的习惯 have a good habit of...） The survey shows that many students have become nearsighted at a very age. At present,_________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ |
At present, about 70% of the students are nearsighted.Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep.Some students spend too much time reading without a rest.They do their homework until 23:00.Others even like to play computer games for several hours.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day.Sometimes we can try to do more sport in our spare time.Things will be better if we have a good habit of using our eyes.In my opinion, we shouldn’t read in the sun.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
题目分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇有关学生近视的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态和主谓一致问题，写作中注意应用所给单词和短语,写明每件事的原因,注意情态动词should的应用.注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。
