问题
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假设你将代表你校2013届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内要点如下表所示。
发言稿须包括所有的要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 表格中”祝愿”一栏，请用自己的2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 词数80个左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends. Thank you for listening. |
答案
We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.
题目分析：本书面表达是一篇发言稿，首先是回顾过去，所以本部分应该用过去时；然后是感谢应该用现在时，最后是祝愿，可以用将来时。由于本发言稿是代表同学们做的，故人称应该用we，不要用I。应注意连词和固定短语的用法，注意书写时应该包括所以内容。
点评：本题的难点在于确定文章的时态及人称，很多同学会用第一人称进行书写。其次，对于提纲作文，书写时一定要有层次性。