以My ideal school为题，写一篇英语短文，词数在80左右。要点如下：
1. 8点半上课，这样我可以多睡一会。下午3点半放学，我可以有更多的时间做课外活动。
2.教室宽敞明亮，老师和蔼善良，同学友好互助。
3.每天只有半个小时的作业，可以有足够的时间留给我的业余爱好。
4．每周有3节体育课，篮球是我最喜欢的运动。
5.学校一边有个公园，另一边有个大超市，周末可以去公园玩，去超市购物。
6.学校每个月进行一次去大城市的旅行。
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One possible version:
My ideal school starts at 8:30a.m.So I can sleep more. Classes are over at 3:30p.m. I have more time to do after—school activities. The classrooms are big and bright. The teachers are very kind to us. The students are friendly and helpful to each other. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We can have enough time for our hobbies. We have three PE lessons and my favourite sport is playing basketball. There is a park on one side of our school and a big shopping mall on the other. We can go to play in the park and go shopping at weekends. Every month we go on a school trip to a big city.
题目分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求自己理想的学校。应该用一般现在时。人称用第一人称或学生们。注意认真阅读材料，分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还运用了have more time to do ; go shopping；动词的-ing形式做表语等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如： so等等。