My name is Lucy Brown. I’m a girl. I’m 12 years old. She is in No.2 Middle School. She is in Class Three, Grade Seven. Her telephone number is 555-9625. Her favorite color is red. So her pen is red. Her ruler is red, too. But she doesn’t like white. Lucy likes sports best. She likes playing basketball. She also likes music.

题目分析：这是一篇给材料作文，描述Lucy Brown的基本情况。在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，本文应该主要用一般现在时。同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。

【亮点说明】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色，如like…best, favorite, also, too。还运用了but ，so等使上下文衔接的更好。