Who can be our good friends? Today the students in class eight talked about the topic. 35 students in the class think good friends should be outgoing, helpful, care about each other and can share the feeling with others. And 20 students believe to be a good friend you should be hard-working and have good grades. Besides, you can help your friends when they are in trouble. The left 8 students think good friends should be good looking with fashion clothes.

In my opinion, good friends must be honest to each other. If you lose the trust of others, you can’t gain friendship. Besides, I agree with some other students that good friends should help each other. But I don’t think that friends should be good-looking. If you are kind enough to others, you can make good friends with others.

题目分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中已明确了写作的中心：好朋友应具备什么条件？在内容上，有不同的人表达了不同的观点，我们我将这些观点陈列清楚，并要说明自己的看法。所以在写作内容上不能漏掉要点。此外，在写作上要条理清晰，注意句子之间的衔接，适当的运用连接词，能熟练运用表达观点的词汇。

【亮点说明】

这篇文章里运用了几种表达观点的词汇，如think，believe，In my opinion在我看来，agree with同意，I don’t think不同意，这些不同词汇的使用使文章更加生动。另外，文章运用了一些连词，如and，besides, if, but等，使句子之间的关系更紧凑，条理更清楚。