假如你Dave,请根据表格信息介绍自己,可适发挥。 要求:语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确。大约80词左右。
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My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.
Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.
题目分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,题目只给出了主要写作内容,故动笔前先要认真阅读题目,确定写作要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是用一二人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见短语:did my homework做家庭作业 at home 在家listened to听 did some reading做阅读。Last weekend, I was busy but happy这外句子运用了but连接两个并列的形容词。And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading这个句子中and连接两个并列的谓语动词,时态保持一致。