Dear Annie,

I’m very glad to hear that you’ll travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about the East Beach.

The East Beach is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away. It’s one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, soft and clean. The water is clear with small waves. It’s suitable for swimming and playing volleyball.

You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can also take a taxi at any time. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a great time there.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

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