Dear Mr. Liu,

I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don’t know how to deal with it.

I have a lot of hobbies, such as playing volleyball, drawing. However, I am so busy that I can’t find time to do the things I want to do. I can’t achieve a balance between study and hobbies. I really feel bad. I often feel stressed. One main cause of stress is too much homework. Also, my parents are strict with me in my study. They hope that I can get high marks. Of course, I want to be a top student in my class. I want to reduce stress by wearing white, but it doesn’t work.

What should I do? I hope you can offer me with some suggestions. They will be great value to me. I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yuan

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