假如你是Jane, 你所在的学校每年在十月至十二月都会开展一系列的校园活动。请你根据下面的时间表用英语给你的同学Peter写一封信，简单介绍一下这些活动。 作文要求： 1．不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2．注意时态运用，可进行适当的拓展。 3．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______ Do you like these activities? Please join us! Yours, Jane |
Dear Peter,
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year. October is a great month. The English Day is on October19 th. We must talk with our classmates in English at school. Our school trip is on October 28th. I can play with my classmates! It’s really interesting! On November 1st, we have an art festival. You like sports, right? The soccer game is on November 20th, and the basketball game is on December 2nd. We also have a book sale in our school library on Decemer 23rd. You can buy many good books at very good prices. Do you like these activities? Please join us!
Yours,
Jane
题目分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。同时注意书信的格式。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文的格式正确，并且将提供的信息全面而自然的展现出来，并不是简单的翻译。在用词方面更是恰当准确。用简单的语言将信息完整的传达出来。一些短语运用恰当。如：from……to, talk with, a book sale, join等等，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.