为了向全世界展示绿色中国,学生会倡议每位同学围绕“如何进行低碳生活”写一篇英语文章,介绍自己如何从身边小事做起,尝试进行低碳生活。
How to Live a Low-Carbon Life(低碳生活) As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us. First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What’s more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment. |
How to Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us. First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What’s more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment.
To live a low-carbon life, we students should save resource, let’s start with the things around us, first we should pay attention to our daily life, we can turn off the computers and other electrical equipment in time when leaving a room.And it is also important for us to turn off the tap after it is used.Another thing is saving paper and we can do it by writing on both sides of paper
We should stop white and air pollution.When we go shopping, we had better bring our own bags or use paper bags instead of plastic bags. At the same time ,we shouldn’t spend money buying some unnecessary goods. When we go outside, we can choose to walk there or ride our bikes,
In my opinion, having a low-carbon life is very necessary for us students, its our duty to do something for the earth. If everyone can do a little, the future will be brighter and more beautiful.
题目分析:
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考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的内容------(1)、为什么要低碳生活;(2)、怎样低碳生活;(3)、个人观点。
认真审题,确定重点和次重点。短文第二部分----怎样低碳生活应该是重点,需要详写。
注意文章文体、人称和时态。
同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。
【亮点说明】
短文层次分明、条理清楚,全文分为3个部分;
没有语法、拼写错误;
过渡语使用合理,如: As we all know
,What’s more,At the same time, In my opinion等;
能使用多种不同的句型,使文章锦上添花,如:having a low-carbon life is very important to us动名词短语做主语;To live a low-carbon life动词不定式短语作目的状语;And it is also important for us to turn off the tap after it is used动词不定式短语做主语等。