My friend Julia

I have a friend named Julia. She has been with her grandparents since she was born in Fujian in 1998.

She likes English ,so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising speaking English every day. She is fond of shopping in the Internet,because things are cheaper and nicer . she likes comfortable cotton clothes. It takes her 20- minute’s ride to school. She gets well along with her classmates. She does little exercise and has hamburgers and candies between two meals. I think she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.

She dreams that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school. She dreams to be a sicentist so that she can make our country stronger.

题目分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写Julia的爱好、学校生活、习惯和梦想，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 pkeep on practising ， practising speaking，is fond of， gets well along with 等短语；过去分词做定语named Julia；时间状语从句since she was born in Fujian in 1998，结果状语从句so she often reads English magazines ,watches English movies and keep on practising English every day，宾语从句she should do more exercise and eat more fruits and vegetables.和that there is no pollution on the earth and students can study on net school；目的状语从句so that she can make our country stronger；不定式做宾语to be a sicentist 。 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。