最近你们学校要举行一次”中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言稿。
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Good morning，everyone.
I think Surfing the Internet is good for us. We can watch the news and learn the information about the world. We can call or e-mail others. We can go to the Internet schools, read kinds of books or learn a foreign language. If you like music, you enjoy plenty of songs on computers. If you like sports, you can watch all kinds of games. And you can play cars, too. The Internet makes our life easier. We can shop on it.
But I don’t think it’s good to be given to surfing the Internet. Playing computer games too much may influence our life. And you shouldn’t look over the unhealthy websites. They may lead you to the wrong way.
That’s all. Thank you.
题目分析：本篇书面表达是一篇提纲类话题作文。请你写一篇关于”中学生该不该上网”的讨论发言稿。话题贴近学生生活，使学生易于发挥。作文可以分为三个方面：1.上网的益处；2.上网注意事项；3.你的看法。要做到层次分明，段落清楚。人称为第一人称，主要使用一般现在时态。注意：句子结构要准确，要点要齐全，内容要合理，篇章结构要连贯，还应满足词数要求。
【亮点说明】该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。该文内容合理，结构连贯，段落清晰，要点齐全。有些句子使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: be good for；lead sb to等。还用了一些连词如：if和and等。提醒学生学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理性。