 2013年，湖南卫视明星亲子真人秀节目《爸爸去哪儿》连续十期收视夺魁，并问鼎年度上星频道中收视最高的季播节目。你班同学也非常喜欢看，并关于“什么样的爸爸才是好爸爸”展开了讨论，请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语简要的介绍并表明你自己的观点。 注：词数80-100左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入字数。
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The other day,we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father.
Most students thought that a good father could make friends with children,play with them and make them happy. Some students believed that a good father must criticize children when they made mistakes and at the same time he should help them to make progress. A few students felt that good fathers could take good care of children,and children could depend on them.
But I think a good father can give us courage,he always encourages me never to give up and leads me to success.
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这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: some students believed that 一些学生认为，at the same time 同时，make progress 取得进步，depend on 依赖，give up 放弃等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。