假如你是晓飞同学,升入九年级后,你的学习和生活发生了很大的变化。下面是你上小学时和现在的作息时间对照表,请根据表格内容,以第一人称How I’ve changed 为题目,记录你一天的生活。
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I am in Grade 9. I have changed a lot in the last few years. I am much busier than I was in the primary school. I used to get up at 7:00, but now I have to get up at 5:30. I used to have breakfast at 7:4, but now at 6:00. In the past we had three classes in the moring,but now there are four .We usually had two classes in the afternoon then.But we have to have four now .When I was young,I had enough time to have sports after school and watched TV in the evening.As for now, I can’t. I used to go to bed at 20:00,instesd ,I have to go to bed at 22:00 now. As for now, I am very tired, I miss my chlidhood very much .
题目分析:这是一篇提纲作文。要求以第一人称的方式叙述在小学和现在的学习生活的不同。主要用到两种时态:一般现在时和一般过去时态。所给内容已经很是详细,只要注意句式结构正确,文章调理连贯就可以了。
【亮点说明】这篇短文在句式上灵活变化,在时间用词上也不断变化以避免重复,如in the last few years.,In the past,When I was young,,As for now,then ,now。I have changed a lot ,I used to have breakfast,we had three classes in the moring等。