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请根据申请表内容完成90词左右的申请信
Name
Zhao Yang
Date of birth
2000年10月20日
Tele. number
0519—82835988
Email
8344506@qq.com
School
No.6 Middle School
Grade
8
Favourite subjects
生物、英语
Interests and hobbies
收集各种动物图片、听音乐
reasons
喜爱大自然,对植物动物感兴趣, 想要更多的了解鸟,人们砍伐树,鸟越来越少,想做些事情来保护鸟
Free time
每周日全天
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang
答案

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.

First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 at No.6 Middle School. My favorite subject is Biology and English. I am interested in collecting the pictures of different animals and listening to music.

Last spring, I went to Zhalong Nature Reserve and took part in activities to protect birds with my friends, I enjoy the natural world, and I’m interested in learning different kinds of plants and animals. I want to know more about the birds.

Some people want to cut down trees. As a result, the number of the birds is becoming smaller and smaller. I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. I can take part in activities all day every Saturday.

I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on 0519-82835988 or email me at 8344506@qq.com.

Yours sincerely,

Zhao Yang

题目分析:这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者先写自己的个人情况,包括所在学校、星座、性格、爱好,然后写自己的烦恼,最后请求帮助。全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,例如be interested in, listen to, take part in, different kinds of , cut down, as a result, smaller and smaller., all day,call me on ,email me at 等短语,文中还用到了条件状语从句 if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society.宾语从句 I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. 文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。

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