Dear Cindy, 

I miss you very much. So I tell you something about my school life. I usually get up at 6:00. Then I go for a walk. At 7:00 I come back. I brush my teeth and take a shower. Then I eat breakfast. After breakfast, I go to school with my friends. After lunch, I go to the club. I read books and plays chess. I eat dinner at home at 6:00 pm. In the evening I like watching TV. At around 9:00 pm I go to bed.

Yours,

Ellen

题目分析：这是一篇命题作文,要求写写一封信，介绍自己的一天。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的动名词短语，注意动名词表示抽象的反复发生的动作,如get up起床；go for a walk去散步；go to school去学校；like doing sth喜欢做某事等.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.