One possible version：

Lily is an English girl. She likes pink very much. Jiaozi is her favorite food. Her favorite animals are pandas. In the morning, she gets up at 6: 30 and in the evening she often goes to bed at 9: 30. Jack is from Canada. Hisfavorite color is blue. He says hamburgers are his favorite food. He likes lions very much. He often gets up at 6: 40 in the morning and goes to bed at 9: 50 in the evening. Lily and Jack are both in Class One. They are good friends.

题目分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Lily和Jack两个人的信息。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her favorite animals……；Jack is……；He likes…….及They are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Lily的情况，接下来介绍Jack的情况，最后指出他们是好朋友。此处用了goes to bed，is from，very much，in the evening，good friends等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。