My American friend

Suzy is my American friend. She has big bright eyes and long straight hair. She has a good sense of humour. She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh.

Among all the subjects, she likes French best, she thinks learning foreign languages is fun. In the school, she has lots of time for after- school activities.

Last week,it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. She visited some places of interest and learn a lot about the culture of China /Chinese culture.

She also likes doing DIY. Yesterday ,she decorated my bedroom with me. We painted the walls blue, put up some beautiful pictures and put in a bright light in my bedroom. We had fun working together.

题目分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要介绍自己的一个美国朋友的外表、个性、旅行经历等。全文主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如sense of humour，tells jokes, lots of after- school activities.,lplaces of interestast week,learn about,a lot, likes doing,put up had fun working等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句 she thinks learning foreign languages is fun.；固定句型it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。