Dear Neil

I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown.My hometown Funing is several kilometers from Shanghai.The air is fresh here.I live in a community in the center of the city.There are a lot of shopping center and restaurants around here.There are many volunteers in the neighborhood,they can help you solve all kinds of problems.If you come,I’ll show you around Dongtai.

I look forward to meeting you soon.                                                                    

Yours 

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