My Pen friends

My name is Li Hua. I have two pen friends. They are Chen Peng and Mary. Chen Peng is 13 years old. Mary is only 11. Chen Peng lives in Shanghai. He plays basketball well and he joins the sports club. Mary can sing and dance and she is in the music club. Chen Peng goes to school by bike. Mary takes a bus to the school. Chen Peng likes pandas very much because they are cute. Mary thinks koalas are very friendly so she likes them. Now it’s sunny in Shanghai and Chen Peng is playing basketball. It’s snowing in Moscow. Mary is making a snowman with her friends now.

题目分析：本文是写笔友平时的生活习惯，或者他们的喜好，所以叙述时用一般现在时，主语是第三人称单数，要注意主谓一致。最后一栏里叙述的是现在正在做的事情，要用现在进行时来表示。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法结构，句子应该符合英语的表达习惯

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，为文章增色不少，如：Chen Peng likes pandas very much because they are cute. Mary thinks koalas are very friendly so she likes them. Mary is making a snowman with her friends now.

等，短文还用了一些连词如：and、because等，使句子结构复杂化，这样避免了句式的单调。