Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is a Junior three student and he is 15 years old. He is a clever, diligent and generous boy. He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. He has put his effort into study since this term and makes great progress. He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. He succeeded in helping Detective Lu. He was rewarded by our school this year. Recently, he is going to attend an exam. So he is under great pressure and can’t sleep well. So I think he should relax himself by listening some light music. I think that will have some help.

题目分析：这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。