假设为了丰富同学们的学校生活,最近你校组织了一次“唱红歌”演唱会。请根据下面的提示,以Let’s sing red songs为标题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
内容提示:
(1) 大家积极参与,演唱会取得了圆满成功;
(2) 平时同学们学习压力很大,这次活动使你们得到了放松;
(3) 你的观点……
参考词汇:
enrich 使丰富;organise 组织;take an active part in 积极参与……;stressed out 紧张的
Let’s sing red songs
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Let’s sing red songs
In order to enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. Everyone took an active part in this activity, and the concert was successfully held. As you know, we are always so busy learning the lessons that we feel stressed out sometimes. The concert gave us a chance to relax.
In my opinion, red songs can make us learn more about the past. And we will love our country more than before. This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn’t it?
题目分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。同时针对个人的真实情况与短文的要求进行恰当的事合,更能加强作品的可读性。
【亮点说明】本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇;用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,没有或基本没有语言错误;书写工整;字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。