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习 * * * * 说:“实现中 * * 伟大复兴,就是中 * * 近代以来最伟大的梦想。”作为中学生,我们也应该有自己的梦想。请说说你的梦想以及你将怎样实现你的梦想。

要求:1.题目自拟;

2.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校;

4. 80词左右。

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

答案

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

题目分析:这是一篇激发学生们谈自己梦想的一篇作文,由习 * * * * 的话导入话题,让学生有梦想并付诸行动去实现梦想,因为谈自己的梦想,所以应该用第一人称写,不仅叙述自己的梦想还得写出如何实现梦想。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式,为文章增色不少,如:The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.等,本文涉及到一般过去时、一般现在时及一般将来时等,语句连贯,梦想贯穿整篇文章。

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