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根据以下信息,以My New Classmate为题写一篇短文,介绍一下Nick吧。
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One possible version:
My new classmate
Today we are very glad to have a new friend. He is a boy. He is called Nick. He is 13 years old. He is from England. He is tall and strong. His hair is long and yellow. He has a round face and big eyes.His mouth is very small. He wears a yellow shirt and green shoes.His shoes are brown. Now we are in the same class, Class 5 Grade 7.
题目分析:本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是介绍一个新的同学。新同学的信息已经全部给出。 考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初一年级重点话题。可以用到所学的短语和句式。
【亮点说明】例文成功地把所给的信息整合成一篇完整的文章。并不是逐条编写句子。在顺序上也做了一定的调整,使文章更加自然。用到了初中一年级所要求掌握的短语及句式,比如be called, come from, has a round face等等。描写准确而全面。