Saving the Earth

As time goes by, people are making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it. This has caused some serious problems. For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help. What shall we do to save her? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.

题目分析：这篇作文要求我们以Saving the Earth 为题写一篇作文。短文主要有三部分内容，第一部分是人类对环境的破坏，即表格中的第一部分；第二部分是由于人类的破坏而导致的问题；第三部分是你自己提出的建议。故这篇作文的结构还是很明星的，写作时只需按照这三部分内容，用正确的英语将其表达出来即可。关于环保的话题，在教材中也出现过，所以学生们这方面的词汇和句型的积累还是有的。写作时要注意语句和段落之间的衔接，使表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，在这篇短文中作者将题目中的要求，表格中的内容完整、准确的表达了出来。首先作者先写了人们对环境的破坏，使用了这样一句话As time goes by, people are making the earth sick，人类让地球生病了，非常生动。接着作者写了这样做带来的问题，For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help.，同样用生动的语言，拟人的手法来描写的。最后作者给出了自己的建议，My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.运用句式准确无误。