初中生活即将结束,假如你是李明,你想给校长写一封信,谈谈你在校学习、生活的感受以及对学校生活的建议。
内容要点如下:
1. 三年来不仅学到许多知识也取得了巨大进步;
2. 感谢学校老师给予你的帮助和教育;
3. 将永难忘记学校的美丽和同学间诚挚的友谊;
委婉指出学校生活美中不足的地方并提出相关建议;对母校的祝福……
注意:
1. 短文要连贯通顺,语法正确;
2. 第4点用两、三句话展开合理的想象;
3. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Principle,
We are going to finish school soon. During the three years______________________________
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We are going to finish school soon. During the three years I have not only learnt much knowledge but also made great progress. I am very grateful for the teachers’ help and education. I will never forget the beauty of the school and the true friendship between classmates. But I think the school life here is not colourful enough. I hope our school can organize more interesting activities for students. I also think our school should solve the stress of teenagers well. We hope our school will become better in the future.
题目分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般过去及将来时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:not only……but also……不但……而且……;I think……我认为……等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。