今年,第二届夏季青年奥运会(Youth Olympic Games)将在南京举办。假如你叫周明,是一名九年级的学生,你想申请做一名自愿者。请写一份简介,介绍自己。 内容要点提示如下:
16岁,南京出身,现居无锡,今年毕业;
今年夏天青奥会将在南京举办,其目标是让世界各地的青年了解奥林匹克精神。
你想做一名志愿者。你组织能力强,曾经……
如果能被接受,你会……
注意:1. 短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 第3、4要点内容须用2~3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数80个左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I am a student in Grade Nine. My name is Zhou Ming.
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Yours sincerely
Zhou Ming
I am 16 years old I was born in Nanjing.But I live in Wuxi now.I will finish/leave school/graduate this year.The 2nd Youth Olympic will be held in Nanjing next year.One purpose of the games is to let the teenagers around/throughout the world learn more about the spirit of Olympic/ Olympic spirit.I want to be a volunteer.I am organized./I can organize things well.I have organized many school activities successfully.If I can be a volunteer.I will try my best to help you as much as I can.
题目分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】亮点一:One purposeof the games is to let the teenagers around the world learn more about the spirit of Olympic。比赛的一个目的是让世界各地的青少年了解奥运精神。
亮点二:If I can be a volunteer, I will try my best to help you as much as I can.如果我可以成为一名志愿者,我会尽我最大的努力尽我所能帮助你。