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     My uncle experienced a bad accident yesterday. It all began last night when my uncle and his friends had

great dinner together. It was not until late at night that my uncle started to drive back home. He was obviously

drunk, but he wouldn't admit it and insisted on driving home himself.

     My uncle soon found the car out of his control and he was not able to see the road clearly. What was

worse, alcohol made him lose sense of danger. Consequently, he drove into a tree along the road and got

seriously injured.

     Luckily enough, Uncle was rushed to the nearest hospital. He came back to life on the hospital bed, only to

find a policeman waiting for him. The officer told him that his driving license would be revoked.

     The dangerous driving after drinking almost cost him his life! I hope public awareness should be raised to

obey the traffic rule