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目前,有些家长为了能让孩子早日成才,不顾孩子的喜好,往往把自己的兴趣强加给孩子,强迫孩子去学这个、学那个,结果事与愿违。观察下面图片,结合图片,以“Dream and reality”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你对培养孩子成才的看法。字数:100字左右

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答案

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Nowadays ,there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children.As a result,the children almost have no time to play.

A typical case is my neighbour Mr.and Mrs.Wang.They want their child to be an artist.They choose a music class on Saturday and a painting on Sunday for the child.In fact,the child has no interest at all.After a few years their efforts are in vain.

I think parents should let their children develop their talent by their own choice and give them enough time and space to learn what they want to.Only in this way can children have a happy and enjoyable life.

题目分析:图画作文是较难的题型之一,因此考生应该特别认真地对待。这类题一般要求考生仔细看图,根据题目要求写成自己的作文。实际上,图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写。首先来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以),其次分析原因,最后发表评论或提出建议,面对此类题型,考生应首先确定主题,然后再动笔。尤其要注意图画中人或物(人与物)的体貌表情特征和背景,确定人物之间,人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想,用生动恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思、所想、所感。注意图画作文中的文字说明。文字说明非常重要,通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点,考生在看说明时要看清主、谓、宾,正确理解说明的意义。

点评:考生应重点检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来,题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在与画面不相符的内容,或未能完全涵盖题目所给提示,考生应对文章做出相应修订。

应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。

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